He walked down the aisle alongside her
Immersed in the thought with the burden of that big secret in his heart
Holding her hand and a forced smile on his face
Just before he passed her hand to her fiance
He managed to whisper the big secret in her ear
The fiance was her father’s killer.
*Note: This flash fiction is by Kripali blogging at Sumptuous Living for the #atozchallenge for the letter ‘E’
Now that’s a twist! I was not expecting that.
Sophie
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Glad you liked it.
Oh! That kind of blows. And unexpected twist. Cruel of him to tell her just before they exchange vows though. Why not before? Why is he telling her now, if he didn’t want to/couldn’t do it before? Is he trying to stop the wedding? Does he hate her? Your poem just made me think and wonder.. which is good.
Thanks a lot Damaria for visiting. Yes it made me think too when I had already posted. But some things are best left unanswered.
My goodness — why do you DO THAT TO US? Lol
Hahha. Thanks for stopping by Carol
*blank stare, mouth open* what????? Very intriguing!!! 🙂
Hey thanks.
Oh wow! This was awesome!
*Shailaja*
Introspection in Shades of 11
A to Z Challenge, 2014/ UBC, April 2014
Thank you Shailaja.
Oh my God! I didn’t see that coming!gr8 write up..
Random Thoughts Naba
Thanks a lot
I want to read more of that story!!!!!!
And more shall you get.
Oh dear Lord, never expected that twist!! 🙂
Hope you liked it.
Oh very much!!!!! u have no idea!!!!
Thank you so much. 🙂
woaa!!! now that’s something… brilliant
Thank you