She looked in horror down at the red liquid spreading across her hands. She had never intended for this to happen. What started as innocent play was now murder most foul.
Rushing to wash her hands, she glanced at the knife that had done the deed. Then, back at the subject, that lay in a pool of its own blood.
She heard footsteps and quickly gathered up all the evidence and disposed of it in a plastic bag outside the door.
Turning, she smiled at her mother, who stood at the door to the refrigerator and asked her, Mala,my dear, what on earth have you done with all the tomatoes?’
***Note : This post is written for us by Shailaja who is a freelance content writer and blogger who shares her views on parenting and life lessons while dabbling in creative fiction. She likes to swim, teach music, read and network with other bloggers. She blogs at www.momdiary.blogspot.in and can be reached at dotingmomdiary@gmail.com.
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😀 good one.. poor tomatoes though.. 😛
Thanks Vaisakh 🙂
Ouuu this is brilliant 🙂 the ending is so unexpected. Well written.
Ha ha.. Thanks Raj 🙂
This post comes across as a thriller in the first para. Who knew it was just a mischievous kiddo at work. A catchy title at it’s best.
Thank you so much for that lovely comment 🙂
Thank you for stopping by and reading 🙂 Glad you liked it!
Gosh, I did the same with two tomatoes yesterday!
Ah, you must have anticipated my story then 😉
What a turn in the tale…..sweet surprise indeed! Well written.
Thank you Inderpreet 😀
Poor tomatoes 😀 Lovely murderer 🙂 😀
Isn’t she though? 🙂 Thanks Sreeja 🙂
Interesting twist…a murder that is tangy and sweet 🙂
Tangy and sweet! Nice idea for another post. Thanks Beloo 🙂
Completely unexpected twist in the story, murder of the tomatoes 😉
You were expecting something more gruesome eh, Prasanna? 😉
Ever since I have posted this, I have read it almost thrice and each time it makes me laugh. Lovely post Shailaja.
Would love if you would be interested to take up another letter. However this is a job done great.
– Kripali
Thank you so much, Kripali 🙂 That is very sweet of you. Hmm, another post? 😉 Tell me which letters are still available and let me see if I can manage one more 🙂
The letters that are taken are N,S,T rest are available.
It was an interesting read 🙂
Thank you, Sushree 🙂
Good one! Feeling sorry for tomatoes! 😛
Just imagine how they must have felt 😉 Thanks Nibha 🙂
hahahahaha good one Shailaja!!!
Thanks Gauri 😀
It was relief in the end…..interesting
Yes, such a big one 😀 Thanks Shelly!
Very nice post Shailaja. I loved the ending.. I was thinking of chicken but knowing that u r a vegetarian I should have thought of tomatoes 😛 😀
Thank you Sri 🙂 Ha ha.. Good point!
And with the knife she made KETCHUP! Thanks for the smile
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